1929-1940 — Part III: Second divorce, third marriage and a bestseller

EACH of these essays/entries is intended to stand alone, so there is a certain degree of duplication in them as it is unlikely they will be read in sequence or even that all will be read by a visitor to these pages. This is intentional: someone reading an essay/entry must not be puzzled by some allusion she or he might not understand because they have not read the other essays/entries.


[For Whom The Bell Tolls is] a tremendous piece of work. It is the most moving document to date on the Spanish Civil War, and the first major novel of the Second World War. As a story, it is superb, packed with the matter of picaresque romance: blood, lust, adventure, vulgarity, comedy, tragedy.
New York Times review.

When Hemingway was being lionized as America’s foremost writer, it was often the clipped dialogue that won him praise. So when Max says, ‘The bed is good,’ he’s speaking pure Hemingway. The same can’t be said of the play, though. As Papa might have penned: ‘It is not good.’
Review of The Fifth Column.

[Hemingway was] full of hearty and bogus bonhomie. He sat himself down behind the bullet-proof shield of a machine-gun and loosed off a whole belt of ammunition in the general direction of the enemy. This provoked a mortar bombardment for which he did not stay.
Jason Gurney, British International Brigade fighter.


FOR PFEIFFER, Hemingway’s affair with Martha Gellhorn was far more serious and threatening than his dalliance with Jane Mason, and it eventually broke up her marriage, although unlike Hadley Richardson, Pfeiffer fought hard to keep her husband. After Gellhorn met Hemingway in Sloppy Joe’s and later accompanied him home for supper (where guests had been waiting several hours for him to show up), she remained on the island when her mother and her brother returned home.

In a manner reminiscent of Pfeiffer’s own tactic to snare Hemingway away from his first wife, she was invited to stay with the Hemingways at their Whitehead Street home and did so for two weeks.

When she returned to the mainland in early January, Hemingway followed her to New York, although their relationship was ostensibly — and perhaps then still was — that of two writer-journalists who had bonded because both were determined to get to Spain to cover the civil war.

In New York he was hired by the North American Newspaper Alliance (NANA), which served more than 60 publications nationwide, to report on the war for them. NANA agreed to pay him handsomely, much to the later irritation of his fellow hacks in Spain when they found out: $500 for a cabled report ($9,171 in 2021) and double that — $1,000 ($18,342) — for a, presumably longer, report sent by mail.

While in New York, Hemingway, John Dos Passos, the playwright Lillian Hellman and his friend Archibald MacLeish formed the company Contemporary Historians to fund and produce a documentary about the civil war Joris Ivens, a young Dutch communist filmmaker, wanted to make. After a quick trip back to Key West (where Pfeiffer again tried to talk him out of going to Spain, as much for his safety as knowing he would be together with Gellhorn), he was then off for Spain, via New York and Paris, and arrived in mid-March 1937 for the first of four visits.

Gellhorn was delayed by trouble gaining the credentials necessary to get into Spain and did not arrive until a few weeks later. Still primarily a novelist and short story writer, she did not yet have much of a journalistic track record and landing a contract proved impossible.

Finally, she persuaded Colliers magazine to ‘sponsor’ her and sign the papers necessary to obtain the visa she needed. Soon, however, she picked up paid work, filing colour pieces to publications back in the US (and went on to make her name as a war correspondent rather than as a novelist).

Once in Madrid, she joined Hemingway at the Hotel Florida, where many of the reporters covering the war stayed, even though it was under constant bombardment from the Nationalist rebels — the front line was less than a mile away and it was often hit by shells intended for the nearby telephone exchange building.

Though it is unclear when Hemingway and Gellhorn began their sexual relationship, it had certainly started by the time they were holed up in the Hotel Florida. Although Gellhorn had her own room — and once during a bombardment and to her fury was locked in there by Hemingway ‘for her safety’ — they shared his bed.

. . .

John Dos Passos had intended to help Joris Ivens with filming The Spanish Earth in practical ways — carrying equipment, scouting locations and generally assisting — but when he heard his friend Jose Robles had disappeared and decided to find out why, he stood down and suggested Hemingway should take over those duties.

There can be no doubt that Hemingway often put himself in real danger in Spain, while helping with the filming of and reporting on some of the battles. He seemed to thrive on danger and was regarded as ‘brave’, but he did not fight in the civil war as he often claimed.

Bizarrely, in later life Pfeiffer insisted that Hemingway had, in fact, been a soldier, commanding a Loyalist battalion, but had to do so secretly and that his journalism was just a necessary ‘cover’. That claim could only have come from her husband and was just one of the growing list of tall stories Hemingway was telling. (He also claimed to have taken part in the mass execution in a basement of more than 100 Falangists. No evidence of that has ever come to light.)

Biographers agree that being in dangerous situations seemed to bring out the best in Hemingway: his mood improved and he became less irascible, he got on better with people, was good and amusing company, and liberally shared the food, wine and whisky his friend the Jewish matador Sydney Franklin always managed to scare up in Madrid where all were in short supply.

Franklin (left) was born in Brooklyn, New York, as Sydney Frumpkin, the son of a nasty NYPD cop who beat him badly as a child. Franklin was gay — and according to at least one biographer a paedophile — but was attached to and admired by Hemingway, who might or might not have known about his sexual orientation. Jeffrey Meyers says Franklin became jealous of Gellhorn the closer she got to Hemingway. He was not very political aware.

After he agreed to travel to Spain with Hemingway — he had lived and worked in Mexico and spoke Spanish — he disingenuously asked him ‘whose side are we on, Ernie?’

There have been suggestions that Hemingway’s story The Mother Of A Queen was an attack on Franklin, but this is unlikely.

That story was published in the collection Winner Take Nothing in 1933, but a year earlier in Death In The Afternoon, Hemingway had written a glowing description of Franklin’s abilities as a matador. He might well have known about Franklin’s homosexuality but it did not affect the friendship he felt for him.

Yet Hemingway was not universally popular. Apart from the generous fees the NANA were paying him, his fellow journalists also envied the perks his fame and high-profile brought him: courtesy of the Loyalist government, he was allowed the use of a car and a driver, and was given an allowance of gasoline, which was also in short supply.

Despite his apparent sincerity in wanting to fight fascism, Hemingway seems to have regarded the war as something of a spectator sport. In July 1936 after rebel army garrisons rose up against the Republican government and fighting broke out between Franco’s Nationalist forces and Spanish Loyalists, he was determined to go to Spain, but was delayed by having to finish his novel To Have And Have Not.

Describing his frustration in a letter his Scribner’s editor in September, he confessed he was worried the fighting would be over before he reached Spain, adding
I hate to have missed this Spanish thing worse than anything in the world . . .
Two months later when he realised the war would not after all soon be over, he again wrote to Perkins
I’ve got to get to Spain. But there’s no great hurry. They’ll be fighting for a long time and it’s cold as hell around Madrid now!
One man who was less than impressed with Hemingway and his gung-ho attitude was the international brigade fighter in the British Battalion, Jason Gurney. In Crusade In Spain, his memoir of his time fighting for the Loyalists, Gurney describes meeting Hemingway when he visited the front and said he was
full of hearty and bogus bonhomie. He sat himself down behind the bullet-proof shield of a machine-gun and loosed off a whole belt of ammunition in the general direction of the enemy. This provoked a mortar bombardment for which he did not stay.
Biographers also note that despite believing he was political astute, Hemingway was rather naïve about the Loyalists and the ruthless control Stalin and the Soviets had over them. Kenneth Lynn sums it up well
If [Hemingway] was fatally susceptible to the temper of the times, it was mainly because of his lack of political sophistication. Only at rare moments in his life had he taken an interest in politics, yet he proposed to make his way through the Spanish labyrinth. The results were foreordained. Although he presented himself to the readers as an unfoolable ‘Papa’, he in fact was easily fooled and the Communists were well-served by him until the outcome of the war as in no doubt.
The Loyalist government itself was also rather naïve: at one point, Stalin persuaded them to hand over all their gold for ‘safe-keeping’ in Russia. They did, it was shipped off to the Soviet Union and never seen again.

The Loyalists consisted of a bewildering number of disparate groups. They included anarchists, Marxists, other Comintern communists, Trotskyists and syndicalists, and they were always falling out and feuding with each other.

Also supporting the Loyalists were Spanish democrats, who simply wanted to protect their new republic. Finally, the Loyalists were joined by idealistic foreigners, who believed the neutrality espoused by the governments of the US, Britain and France was not an option. These young men, not just from all over Europe but as far off as the US, South Africa and Australia, wanted to fight the growing fascism in Europe.

Of the Soviet-controlled Loyalists and the fascist Nationalists (backed by Germany’s Adolf Hitler and Italy’s Benito Mussolini) they considered the communists the lesser of two evils. Most important for them was that, with their own governments opting for neutrality, Stalin was the only force confronting fascism.

Those foreigners fighting for the Loyalists who did not want to ally themselves with Stalin and the Comintern (such as George Orwell) aligned with POUM, a Marxist and Trotskyist grouping. It didn’t help the Loyalist cause that supporters of the Stalinist Comintern and POUM often fought each other.

Despite their idealism and honourable intentions, the Loyalists were often something of a disorganised rabble. Many of the volunteers who enlisted in the International Brigades had too little or no military training and often appalling commanders.

In his memoir, Jason Gurney is less than complimentary about the several leaders he served under. A very few were gifted soldiers, he said, but others simply had no idea what they were supposed to be doing and how to go about doing it.

He describes André Marty (right), the chief political commissar of the International Brigades who welcomed the foreign recruits when they arrived in Barcelona, as ‘sinister and a ludicrous figure’ who
always spoke in an hysterical roar, he suspected everyone of treason, or worse, listened to advice from nobody, ordered executions on little or no pretext — in short he was a real menace.
Hemingway was also unimpressed by the ‘murderous’ Marty, one of the many real-life civil war participants included in his novel For Whom The Bell Tolls, and portrays him as condoning the horrors committed by the communist Loyalists.

Yet Hemingway himself often turned a blind eye to these horrors and, unlike John Dos Passos, also tacitly condoned what was going on. He almost certainly knew of the Loyalist purges and will also have heard reports of the Stalinist show trials and summary executions in Russia; but he chose to disregard them and work with the Stalinists because he felt they gave the disorganised Loyalists much-needed structure, ‘discipline’ and useful cohesion.

Hemingway seems to have been something of a dupe and was played by Mikhail Koltsov, publicly Pravda’s correspondent in Spain covering the civil war, but privately an NKVD agent and thought to have been reporting directly to Stalin.

Koltsov, who became Karkov in For Whom The Bell Tolls, worked on Hemingway’s vanity as seeing himself as ‘a man who had the inside gen’ and fed him all kinds of stories about ‘fascist collaborators’ which Hemingway believed and repeated. Koltsov’s aim was simply to ensure disharmony and distrust
among the groups making up the Loyalists so that the Soviets could control them better.

Being Stalin’s man didn’t much help Koltsov (left), however: at the end of 1937 he was recalled to Moscow and arrested for criticising the Russian purges and show trials, and shot just over two years later. Having an affair with the wife of his then NKVD boss didn’t help. She too was shot.

Hemingway’s links to the Soviets didn’t end there: after the collapse of the Soviet Union, a former KGB officer, Alexander Vassiliev, was going through old NKVD files and discovered that in 1941 when Hemingway was just about to start a tour of China with Martha Gellhorn, he agreed to supply the Soviets with information. He was thus — though de facto just nominally — ‘a KGB agent’ and given the codename ‘Argo’. He supplied very little information, if any, to the KGB and nothing of value.

Hemingway’s facility speaking Spanish is as questionable as his political astuteness. Some accounts, unsurprisingly including Hemingway’s own, insist he eventually came to speak the language fluently. Others report that his command of Spanish — and for that matter French and Italian — was always flawed, notably grammatically.

Arturo Barea, who ran the Loyalist press bureau based in the telephone exchange near the Hotel Florida where reporters had to have their stories cleared before they could be filed, recalls that he and other Spaniards were often amused by the infelicities and malapropisms of which Hemingway was guilty when he spoke Spanish. Later, in the 1950s when he visited Spain and had been living in Cuba for almost two decades, Spaniards were equally amused by the thick Cuban accent he had acquired.

Like much in Hemingway’s life the outlines of what was and was not the case are rather blurred.

. . .

While in Madrid living with Gellhorn at the Hotel Florida, Hemingway wrote his only play, The Fifth Column. Like much of Hemingway’s work, it was quasi-autobiographical, although any such suggestion annoyed him and he always insisted it wasn’t true.

The play’s central character — that is, Hemingway’s alter ego — was a cynical, hard-drinking, hard-living American and self-confessed ‘third-rate’ journalist in Madrid ostensibly reporting on the Spanish Civil War as a cover for his work as a secret agent. The rather dumb blonde American who is in love with him and with whom he has an affair was a barely disguised Martha Gellhorn. By all accounts Hemingway’s portrayal of her was said to be remarkably true to life, except that Gellhorn was certainly not stupid.

After each sojourn in Spain Hemingway returned to Key West and his wife and sons, but to an increasingly fraught atmosphere. Pfeiffer, under no illusions at all, was desperate to save her marriage. After his first visit to Spain, he didn’t stay at home long and was soon off to Bimini, part of the Bahamas and 50 miles east of Miami, which he had discovered a few years earlier when he was told there was excellent fishing.

There he finished and corrected the gallery proofs of To Have And Have Not, but this work was interrupted by a trip to New York to make a speech at a writers’ conference and to complete narration of The Spanish Earth. Before undertaking his second trip to Spain to cover the civil war, he also visited the White House to attend a private viewing of the film for President Roosevelt and his wife Eleanor (who was a friend of Gellhorn’s), and went to Hollywood, with Pfeiffer, to raise money for the Loyalists.

In mid-August 1937, Hemingway and Gellhorn headed back to Spain — though for appearances sake they travelled separately. It was while he was in New York waiting to board the liner to take him to France the following day, that Hemingway had his silly ‘fight’ with Max Eastman (right) in Max Perkins’s Scribner’s office when he unexpectedly dropped in on Perkins and found Eastman already present.

Eastman’s review of Death In The Afternoon a few years earlier, entitled Bull In The Afternoon, had enraged Hemingway. The review began by conceding
There are gorgeous pages in Ernest Hemingway’s book about bullfights — big humor and reckless straight talk of what things are, genuinely heavy ferocity against prattle of what they are not. Hemingway is a full-sized man hewing his way with flying strokes of the poet’s broad axe which I greatly admire.
But very soon Eastman developed his theme, declaring that there was also
an unconscionable quantity of bull — to put it as decorously as possible — poured and plastered all over what he writes about bullfights. By bull I mean juvenile romantic gushing and sentimentalizing of simple facts.
He ridiculed Hemingway’s suggestion that bullfighting was ‘art’ and ‘tragedy’ and compared his literary style to
wearing false hair on the chest.
Hemingway, always sensitive on the subject of his masculinity, had taken this to imply he was less than manly. So meeting Eastman, he pulled open his shirt to reveal a chest full of hair and persuaded Eastman to bare his, comparatively hairless, chest. It was all very light-hearted until that point, but Hemingway’s mood suddenly changed.

Spotting the book in which Eastman’s review had appeared on Perkins’s desk, he picked it up and slapped it in Eastman’s face. Accounts of how the subsequent and very brief ‘fight’ then developed vary, with both sides claiming victory.

Eastman claimed he threw Hemingway over Perkins’s desk and stood him in the corner on his head. Hemingway claimed he could have punched Eastman much harder, but held back because Eastman might have fallen out of the office window into Fifth Avenue. As it was Eastman landed on the window seat.

Perkins’s private account, in a letter to Scott Fitzgerald, is probably closest to the truth: concerned that Hemingway, a younger, then fitter and stronger man, might harm Eastman, he rushed around from behind his desk to try to separate the two. He found Eastman sitting on Hemingway’s chest and Hemingway grinning broadly, his temper outburst over and his mood again light-hearted. The story made the New York Times three times, but publicly Scribner’s would only confirm that ‘the affair had taken place’ adding only that
this is a personal matter between the two gentlemen in question.
. . . 

From Paris, Hemingway and Gellhorn carried on to Madrid and arrived by mid-September. To Have And Have Not was published a month later and in December Pfeiffer, pining for Hemingway and without warning him, crossed the Atlantic for Paris and was reunited with him just after Christmas. She and Hemingway were back in Key West by the end of January but relations between them, though polite, were cold. The marriage was ending, though at a slow pace.

Just six weeks later he was off back to Spain, and was again joined Gellhorn. By the end of May he was back in New York and carried on to Key West. In August he spent four weeks with Pfeiffer in Wyoming, before he returned to Paris to spend September and October with Gellhorn, then they returned to Spain where the Loyalist were slowly losing to the Nationalist. By the beginning of December he was back in Key West, but after Christmas returned to New York to rejoin Gellhorn. 

In mid-February 1939, he took off from Key West for Havana where he started writing For Whom The Bell Tolls, completing the first two chapters in a month. Back at home in Whitehead Street in Key West, the superficial harmony with Pfeiffer now gave way to continual rowing and anger.

Finally, he sailed his boat, Pilar, to Havana where he was joined by Martha. They initially stayed at the Hotel Ambos Mundi, but moved to the Hotel Sevilla, although Hemingway still had his mail forwarded to the Ambos Mundi to keep up the fiction that that was where he was living. Bar the divorce proceedings 20 months later, Hemingway’s marriage to Pfeiffer was over.

. . .

Martha, who did not just like, but demanded cleanliness and order, soon got fed up living hand-to-mouth in the hotel with a very untidy and distressingly unhygienic Hemingway, and found and rented a rundown and overgrown farm, Finca Vigia, 15 miles from the centre of Havana. Hemingway joined her, and over the next few months and years she slowly brought the Finca Vigia back to life.

After the anger and upset in Key West with Pfeiffer, ironically, Hemingway’s romance with Gellhorn did not, in fact, go too well. It had thrived amid the drama and excitement of the Spanish civil war and in the context of an illicit affair, but it already began to come under strain in the supposed bliss and domesticity of the Finca Vigia.

One bone of contention was that Gellhorn, like his mother, was a strong and independent woman who stood up for herself. Hemingway preferred compliant women, such as his first two wives, who put him at the centre of everything, especially their lives. He was also possessive, and at the time friends who knew them both wondered why Gellhorn put up with such behaviour.

She also quickly became bored with the domesticity and routine, and missed her life as a working journalist. She was, though, still smitten with Hemingway as her letters to him at the time demonstrate, although she was as much smitten, some biographers claim, with being associated with ‘a great writer’ as the man himself.

By her own admission, the sexual side of their marriage — which was never great, although early in their affair she had boasted to friends about Hemingway’s performance in bed — was not important to her. It seems there was some physical aspect to her body which made intercourse in some way difficult, although this seems finally to have been remedied by a visit to her physician.

At first the strains on their relationship were not great, but comparatively soon she needed to be up and away and working as a journalist again. She wanted a little independence — and not least money she had earned for herself and was not fulfilled simply running Hemingway’s household. He did not take well to that, and over time he became ever more fed-up with her attitude and, once she had taken off on assignment, her absences. For the present, though, those incipient strains were ignored.

. . .

The Fifth Column was finally premiered on Broadway in March 6, 1940, by Lee Strasberg, but his production was not of the work Hemingway had written. Strasberg staged a left-of-centre anti-fascist piece based on Hemingway’s play but more or less written by the Hollywood screenwriter Benjamin Glazer, who had been hired as what today is called a script doctor. It was not a success and ran for just 87 performances, closing on May 18.

The New York Mint Theater Company claims its own production of The Fifth Column 68 years later, in March 1968 and the work’s first revival, was the world premiere of the play Hemingway had actually written; but it, too, ran for less than ten weeks.

In its review of the 2008 production the New York Times was less than complimentary — the play, it commented, was ‘more a literary curiosity’ which, it complained, was ‘full of repetitions, extraneous scenes and lazy devices’. A review in New York’s Theater Mania is even less kind: the piece, it said, had a central conundrum, ‘a lack of mounting tension constructed from the series of vignettes that Hemingway thought constituted a play’. It concluded
When Hemingway was being lionized as America’s foremost writer, it was often the clipped dialogue that won him praise. So when Max says, ‘The bed is good,’ he’s speaking pure Hemingway. The same can’t be said of the play, though. As Papa might have penned: ‘It is not good.’
A review of a second revival of the play, in 2016 in London, by Britain’s Guardian had some praise for the production, but described the play itself as ‘a rambling affair’ and a ‘minor work by a major writer’.

The Fifth Column had been published by Scribner’s the autumn of 1938 in a volume entitled The Fifth Column And The First Forty-Nine Stories. Consisting of the play and the first 49 stories Hemingway had written, it included four new and more recent short stories first published in Esquire and Cosmopolitan.

But it still wasn’t what Scribner’s wanted, so Max Perkins and the house were delighted that Hemingway’s experiences in Spain were finally to help him to produce the novel they had been pressing him for. He began writing For Whom The Bell Tolls it in February 1939 in Havana, carried on in Key West and then on his hunting and fishing trips to the Rockies with Gellhorn (though now he visited Idaho with her and later Mary Welsh, his fourth wife, instead Wyoming).

. . .

The new novel was a very welcome comeback for Hemingway. The career which had slowly been drifting nowhere for the past ten years was suddenly and quite spectacularly back on track, and contemporary critics were wildly enthusiastic about Hemingway’s latest production. A New York Times review described it as
a tremendous piece of work. It is the most moving document to date on the Spanish Civil War, and the first major novel of the Second World War. As a story, it is superb, packed with the matter of picaresque romance: blood, lust, adventure, vulgarity, comedy, tragedy.
Other reviewers also unpacked their superlatives. Time magazine (which, with Life magazine, became a stalwart champion of Hemingway for the next 20 years as his fame and celebrity grew and made him good copy) wrote that after the work published in the 1930s
Even his admirers wondered where he was going to find another experience big enough to make him write another A Farewell To Arms. If ever he did, they thought, he would produce another great book. They misunderstood Hemingway’s apparent obsession with killing, forgot that the dominant experience of this age is violent death. In 1936 Hemingway found the great experience — the Spanish Civil War. This week he published the great novel — For Whom The Bell Tolls . . . [it] is 1) a great Hemingway love story; 2) a tense story of adventure in war; 3) a grave and somber tragedy of Spanish peasants fighting for their lives. But above all it is about death . . . For Whom The Bell Tolls, unlike other novels of the Spanish Civil War, is told not in terms of the heroics and dubious politics of the International Brigade, but of a simple human struggle of the Spanish people.
And Time warned that
Leftists may claim the book, but they will not like realistic descriptions of the cynical G.P.U. agents . . . However he may fancy himself as a leftist sympathizer, as great and sensitive artist Ernest Hemingway is well over of the Red rash. The bell in this book tolls for all mankind.
In a piece marking the novel’s publication 50 years on biographer Michael Reynolds writes:
Dorothy Parker wrote that it was ‘beyond all comparison, Ernest Hemingway’s finest book’. The Nation thought the book set ‘a new standard for Hemingway in characterization, dialogue, suspense and compassion’. Clifton Fadiman in The New Yorker said it ‘touches a deeper level than any sounded in the author’s other books. It expresses and releases the adult Hemingway’. Saturday Review of Literature called it ‘the finest and richest novel which Mr. Hemingway has written . . . and it is probably one of the finest and richest novels of the last decade’. Edmund Wilson loved the novel: ‘Hemingway the artist is with us again; and it is like having an old friend back’.
And Reynolds notes that
Amidst such effusive praise, only John Chamberlain, of the major reviewers, had the reserve to question whether this was Hemingway’s best novel or not. We would not know, he said, ‘until the passions of the present epoch have subsided’.
Notable dissent from the majority view came from Arturo Barea (left) who had known Hemingway in Spain.

As an active Loyalist he had escaped Nationalist vengeance by a whisker. When all seemed lost, he decided to surrender and be shot rather than face being lynched by a Nationalist mob.

But the Nationalist interrogator he faced turned out to be an old school friend who immediately declared surrendering was nonsense, found him a set of clothes and quietly set him free.

Barea finally found sanctuary in a British consulate who managed to spirit him away on a boat via Mallorca.

Barea declared that Hemingway thought he knew Spain and the mentality of the people, but he did not. They would never behave in the way he described and would never so brutally slaughter the Nationalist as Hemingway portrayed.

Pertinently for the ‘love story of the novel’, no self-respecting middle-class girl would jump into bed with a man on the very first night after meeting him. The mass rape of Maria was also too far-fetched: no Spaniard would care to have sex — even in rape — with a woman ‘still moist’ from a previous encounter.

. . . 

For Whom The Bell Tolls was given an initial print run of 210,000 copies — an astonishing 200,000 more than To Have And Have Not, which might suggest Perkins and Scribner’s had a great deal more faith in Hemingway’s latest novel than they had had in To Have And Have Not — and the film rights were immediately snapped up by Paramount for $110,000.

Within six months the new novel had sold just short of half a million copies, thanks to its choice by the Book-Of-The-Month Club which spurred even greater public interest. This was an irony given the scorn Hemingway had earlier in his career expressed for novels chosen by the Book-Of-The-Month Club and those authors who benefited from the boost in sales.

Yet for almost ten year until he published Across The River And Into The Trees in 1950 that was it for Hemingway, Scribner’s and Perkins. With the publication of For Whom The Bells Tolls and a new wife, a second nominal stage of Hemingway’s life was concluded. 

He had finished writing and revising the novel in July 1940, and it was published on October 21, two weeks before his divorce from Pfeiffer. He married Gellhorn two week later.



1929-1940 — Part II: Becoming the legend, poor sales, affairs and depression

EACH of these essays/entries is intended to stand alone, so there is a certain degree of duplication in them as it is unlikely they will be read in sequence or even that all will be read by a visitor to these pages. This is intentional: someone reading an essay/entry must not be puzzled by some allusion she or he might not understand because they have not read the other essays/entries.



[Hemingway] has moved steadily toward mastery of his technique, though that is by no means the perfect instrument it has been praised for being. Technique, however, is not enough to make a great writer, and that is what we have been asked to believe Mr. Hemingway was in process of becoming. The indications of such a growth are absent from this book, as they have been absent from everything Mr. Hemingway has written since A Farewell to Arms. There is evidence of no mental growth whatever; there is no better understanding of life, no increase in his power to illuminate it or even to present it. Essentially, this new novel is an empty book . . . In spite of its frequent strength as narrative writing, To Have and Have Not is a novel distinctly inferior to A Farewell to Arms . . . Mr. Hemingway’s record as a creative writer would be stronger if it had never been published.
J. Donald Adams, New York Times review.

BY THE mid-1930s, Hemingway was under increasing pressure from Scribner’s to produce a follow-up novel to A Farewell To Arms.

The publisher was disappointed with the sales of the non-fiction books, Death In The Afternoon (which some accounts suggest only just broke even) and Green Hills Of Africa, and even Hemingway’s third collection of short stories, Winner Take Nothing, had not sold as well as hoped and expected.

To Hemingway’s immense irritation, he was also under pressure from a largely left-of-centre literary world still in thrall to its sanitised view of Soviet Russia to write more politically engaged fiction — the US was in the middle of its Great Depression. Hemingway had long resisted such political engagement and insisted a writer’s job was to write, not to indulge himself in politics.

As early as 1932 he had written to the Chicago bookseller, Paul Romaine, who was consistently urging him to become more politically engaged
There is no left or right in writing. There is only good writing and bad writing.
He did, though, make a notable exception after a great number of Great War veterans working on a government project in the Florida Keys died in the worst hurricane to hit the area in many years on September 2, 1935.

. . .

The veterans were based on Upper and Lower Matecumbe Keys just over 70 miles towards the mainland from Key West and had been employed, at $30 a month ($592 in 2021) plus free bed and board, on a Federal Emergency Relief Administration (F.E.R.A.) scheme to build bridges and roads to link the Florida Keys.

In 1934, Monroe County, to which Key West belonged, had declared bankruptcy, and unemployment on the island had risen by 80% after the naval base and many of its factories were closed down. When Franklin D. Roosevelt became president, the his government planned to revitalise Key West by turning it into an attractive tourist destination, and to do that it needed to improve access.

By 1933, just under four years after the Wall Street crash, one in four of every American citizen able to work was unemployed, but the then President, Republican Herbert Hoover, stubbornly refused to spend government money on social welfare schemes. He insisted that in time the US economy would sort itself out, and for him the Great War veterans were an embarrassment.

In 1924, the vets had been promised a war service bonus, but it was not due to be paid until 1945; so in 1932, 17,000 veterans — calling themselves the ‘Bonus Expeditionary Force’ — petitioned the government to pay the bonus early. They gathered in Washington and were joined by another 27,000 hungry men, women and children, living in shanty camps in and around the capitol. Hoover’s government dismissed the vets’ request and told them to return home.

When the protesters ignored the order and police were sent in to evict them from government property they had occupied, a riot developed and two of them where shot dead. Hoover then ordered the army to


drive the 44,000 protesters out of Washington at gunpoint. Unsurprisingly, in a landslide Democrat victory, he was voted out of office the following November by the Democrat Roosevelt, who, once inaugurated in March 1933, set about trying to get the US economy going again. F.E.R.A. was created as one of his measures.

. . .

Hurricanes were a seasonal hazard in the Florida Keys, but the September 2, 1935, Labor Day hurricane was particularly strong. Its force was badly underestimated and its position was not well-known by the then US Weather Bureau, which had initially warned of a ‘rainy windstorm’. By the time the danger from the storm was apparent and it was thought wise to evacuate the veterans, it was far too late.

The evacuation plan involved a train being sent south from the mainland, but first it had to be assembled — because of a misunderstanding the deputy administrator on duty thought it was on already standby and summoned it far too late — and it didn’t leave Miami until mid-afternoon on September 2 when the storm was well underway.

The train was then delayed by a steel cable that had been blown across its track in the high winds which had to be cleared. When it finally arrived in Upper Matecumbe, the whole train except the heavier locomotive was blown over and derailed.

The vets had been housed, despite warnings from locals when the vets and their families had arrived, in flimsy wooden shacks on the Matecumbe Keys beaches and had no protection whatsoever. Even many of

 

The vets had been housed in flimsy wooden shacks on the Matecumbe Keys beaches, but the storm was so fierce, even solid brick buildings where many of them sheltered with the locals were badly damaged or destroyed. The train sent down from the mainland to evacuate the vets was blown of its track and only the heavier locomotive was left standing


the solid brick houses in which the locals lived which usually withstood the hurricane winds were demolished. The vets had no chance.

They were blown out to sea, struck by flying debris, drowned in towering waves, and many bodies were washed into the trees where they decomposed over the following days in the hot sun. Figures on how many veterans and locals died in the hurricane vary from between 300 to more than 1,000.

Hemingway visited the scene a few days later, and the appalling death and devastation the hurricane had caused moved him he write and publish in the left-wing journal New Masses — in response to a request

 

from the journal, a point that is rarely made — a polemical piece taking the authorities to task for sending the veterans to the Keys during hurricane season.

Hemingway entitled his piece Who Killed These Men?, but to his immense irritation and without his permission, the New Masses editor changed it to Who Murdered The Vets? It began by asking
Whom did [the veterans] annoy and to whom was their possible presence a political danger? Who sent them down to the Florida Keys and left them there in hurricane months? Who is responsible for their deaths?
He continued
[The writer of this article] does know that wealthy people, yachtsmen, fishermen such as President Hoover and President Roosevelt, do not come to the Florida Keys in hurricane months. Hurricane months are August, September and October, and in those months you see no yachts along the Keys. You do not see them because yacht owners know there would be great danger, inescapable danger, to their property if a storm should come . . . But veterans, especially the bonus-marching variety of veterans are not property, they are only human beings; unsuccessful human beings, and all they have is to lose their lives.
Describing the scene and the dead vets he saw, he wrote
. . . you found [the vets’ bodies] high in the trees where the water had swept them. You found them everywhere and in the sun all of them were beginning to be far too big for their blues jeans and jackets that they could never fill when they were on the bum and hungry.
. . .

It was an effective piece, but a distinct rarity among his writing. Hemingway, who strongly believed in ‘small government’ and the least possible official involvement, had previously been very sniffy about F.E.R.A. and its activities, and in Green Hills Of Africa had described it as some
. . . sort of YMCA show. Starry-eyed bastards spending money that somebody will have to pay. Everybody in our town quit work to go on relief. Fishermen all turned carpenters. Reverse of the Bible.
Pertinently, though, the piece for New Masses was journalism not fiction, and he still believed that writers should steer clear of politics. He made that clear a few years later in his introduction Men At War, his selection of ‘war writings’. He insisted
The hardest thing in the world to do is to write straight honest prose on human beings. First you have to know the subject; then you have to know how to write. Both take a lifetime to learn, and anybody is cheating who takes politics as a way out. It’s too easy. All the outs are too easy, and the thing itself is too hard to do.
Quite apart from his views about writers and politics, this observation is typical of Hemingway (as John Raeburn might have pointed out): yet again he implies — almost underlines without directly saying so — that he is the ‘expert’ and the one with the ‘real gen’, the ‘insider’. His subtext is clearly ‘but I, Ernest Hemingway, unlike many, am not only able to do the hardest thing in the world, but I both know about human beings and how to write’.

An irony is that Hemingway was still in his early forties when he wrote the above and had published just four novels and three collections of short stories: his boast that ‘writing takes a lifetime to learn’ would be a little more acceptable — and a little less self-regarding — from a writer who had at least come close to completing his three score and ten and had rather more published work to his name.

. . .

Halfway through the 1930s Hemingway suffered a severe and prolonged bout of depression, but it seems to have become particularly acute in 1936. Although he had experienced depressions throughout his life (with some biographers suggesting that he, like his father who shot himself in 1928, might have been bi-polar), this episode was worse than anything he had suffered for some time.

Whether or not this latest deep bout was the mooted bi-polar cycle at its lowest ebb, or whether there were definite causes would be impossible to establish; but enjoying success for several years, he was now having to accept that much was no longer going his way.

After the triumphant reception of his first two novels and his first two collections of short stories, the overwhelmingly negative reaction, both critical and public, to his recently published works of non-fiction upset him far more than he cared to admit.

At first the critics and the public did not know what to make of the new direction he had taken. In the Pull Of Politics, Milton Cohen observes
The reviews of Death In The Afternoon were more puzzled than disrespectful; this was, after all, Hemingway's first book after his acclaimed A Farewell To Arms, and in 1932 his reputation was still riding that wave of critical adulation.
Then came his third volume of original short stories, and he was disappointed by its rather paler performance. Cohen writes
The collection of stories that followed in 1933, Winner Take Nothing, also received mixed reviews. Some were now edged with impatience since it was clear from the stories that Hemingway’s indifference to the times in Death In The Afternoon was not an anomaly and that the author had not at all changed his theme and focus from the 1920s – themes such as existential despair that did not speak to the Depression 30s.
Since the short story was a Hemingway specialty, the mixed reviews stung even more than those of the bullfight book, suggesting either that something was amiss with the fundamentals of Hemingway’s writing, or, as he preferred to believe, that the critics were just out to get him for not conforming to the times.

In The Nation William Troy’s scathing dismissal was simply that
It is among Mr Hemingway’s admirers that the suspicion is being most strongly created that the champion is losing, if he has not already lost, his hold.
Troy’s own view of the collection of stories was that it was 
. . . the poorest and least interesting writing [Hemingway] has ever placed in public view.
When Green Hills Of Africa, the work that followed his volume of stories, was also dismissed, quite brutally by some critics, Hemingway convinced himself that the critics hated him and made his view plain.

Statements such as this from Granville Hicks in the left-wing New Masses in which he candidly queried whether Hemingway had simply lost it will not have helped one bit:
He is very bitter about the critics and very bold in asserting his independence of them, so bitter and so bold that one detects signs of a bad conscience . . . Would Hemingway write better books if he wrote on different themes? ‘Who Murdered The Vets?’ suggests he would . . . In six years Hemingway has not produced a book even remotely worthy of his talents.
Hicks’s left-handed concession — that Hemingway still had ‘talents’ — will have done little to soften the blow. And though publicly Hemingway’s attitude was stout-hearted defiance, privately, it seems, he became ever more depressed.

He is also likely to have read the sober assessment of his recent work by the poet John Peale Bishop, published towards the end of 1936 in The New Republic. Bishop had known Hemingway well in the Paris years, from when he was still unpublished until after A Farewell To Arms appeared, but he had then lost touch.

In his piece, entitled Homage To Hemingway, Bishop had nothing but praise for the unknown young writer he had met in Paris in 1922. The Hemingway he then knew, he wrote,
had many of the faults of the artist, some, such as vanity, to an exaggerated degree . . . . [but these] were compensated for by extraordinary literary virtues.
He added that Hemingway
was instinctively intelligent, disinterested, and not given to talking nonsense. Toward his craft he was humble, and had, moreover, the most completely literary integrity it has ever been my lot to encounter.
This was high praise indeed, so Hemingway, in the depths of his depression and assailed, he believed, on all sides, must have been disheartened by Bishop’s observation that by 1936
he has become the legendary Hemingway. He appears to have turned into a composite of all those photographs he has been sending out for years: sunburned from snows, on skis; in fishing get-up, burned dark from the hot Caribbean; the handsome, stalwart hunter crouched smiling over the carcass of some dead beast. Such a man could have written most of Green Hills Of Africa.

Like the other critics, Bishop was unimpressed by Green Hills Of Africa, which he described it as ‘hard-boiled’. He goes on to elaborate:
If that word is to mean anything, it must mean indifference to suffering and, since we are what we are, can but signify a callousness to others’ pain. When I say that the young Hemingway was among the tenderest of mortals, I do not speak out of private knowledge, but from the evidence of his writings. He could be, as any artist must in this world, if he is to get his work done, ruthless. He wrote courageously, but out of pity; having been hurt, and badly hurt, he could understand the pain of others. His heart was worn, as was the fashion of the times, up his sleeve and not on it. It was always there and his best tricks were won with it. Now, according to the little preface to Green Hills of Africa, he seems to think that having discarded that half-concealed card, he plays more honestly. He does not. For with the heart the innate honesty of the artist is gone. And he loses the game.
This will no have been easy reading for Hemingway who is more than likely to have been aware of it.

Milton Cohen alludes to another worry which might have been darkening Hemingway’s spirits — that less than ten years on from the ‘shocking’ impact of his novel The Sun Also Rises and the subsequent hi-falutin’ claims that it described the ‘despair’ of the younger generation, Hemingway was now out of touch.

The world had moved on and so had he, but in a different direction. Cohen writes that in the negative reviews of his works of non-fiction
one senses not merely disapproval but exasperation with Hemingway’s assumptions that the American public of 1935 – still staggering under a worldwide economic depression, and now confronting the rise of Nazism and the aggression of Italian fashion fascism – would thrill the expensive adventures of the sportsman in a far-off land and eagerly devour his most casually delivered pontifications on American literature and letters. To the economic and issues of the day the book is serenely indifferent — except to the leftist critics who have dared to criticize the author.
Finally the penny dropped: despite Hemingway’s misgivings and his long-held conviction that writers should not be political, he capitulated to the pressure from his left-wing literary peers.

They had been impressed by his polemic Who Killed The Vets? in New Masses and were convinced he could be persuaded to throw in his lot with them, so he would write the ‘socially-engaged’, political work they were demanding.

. . .

After the lack of success of Hemingway’s last three works — more a comparative lack in the case of his short stories — pressure, which he could no longer ignore, also came from the from his editor Max Perkins at Scribner’s who increasingly urged to produce new fiction.

Perkins, who always indulged Hemingway a great deal and had agreed to publish Death In The Afternoon against his better judgment, had been dismayed by the poor sales of Hemingway’s non-fiction books and again urged him to write another novel.

To do as he was bidden as well as to assuage the literary left, Hemingway conceived of To Have And Have Not; and although he did not settle on that title until after the writing was well underway, it succinctly expressed what he hoped was the work’s left-wing theme.

But writing it took several years and was not easy, and his confused motivations, method and intentions might explain the literary hotch-potch he eventually delivered to Scribner’s.

There was possibly other pressure on Hemingway to write the novel, but it was pressure he imposed on himself: he is later said to confided in Hollywood director Howard Hawks that he wrote To Have And Have Not because he ‘needed money’.

On the face of it that is an odd admission. In Depression-era 1930s America the Hemingway Key West household income was stable and enviably high; and although he spent a great deal, Hemingway would not have been short of money.

The problem was more personal: his contribution to the household from what his pen earned him was rather smaller than what Pfeiffer contributed from her trust fund: he felt he was living off his wife, and this irked him a great deal, especially in his depressed state in 1936.

In the spring and summer he had written two of his better known short stories, The Snows Of Kilimanjaro (which appeared in Esquire in August) and The Short Happy Life Of Francis Macomber (which Cosmopolitan published in September). Both were an oblique, probably unconscious, commentary on his marriage to Pfeiffer.

Both the stories’ protagonists — Harry, a writer dying of gangrene who feels he has squandered his talent, and Francis Macomber, a coward who redeems himself — resent their wives (who are both thought to have been based jointly on Pfeiffer and Jane Mason with whom he had an affair that ended badly).

Harry feels that by opting for the soft, good life his rich wife’s money provided he has betrayed his talent. Rich Francis Macomber knows that his wife, described by Hemingway as ‘an all-American bitch’, just wants him for his money.

He despises himself because he kow-tows to her and tolerates her infidelity, and he, too, feels he has been corrupted. From letters to, and in conversation with, friends, Hemingway also revealed he felt he had sold out to Pfeiffer’s money.

The claim that Hemingway wrote his novel because he ‘needed money’ was made in In Who The Devil Made It by the Hollywood director Peter Bogdanovich in which he records conversations he had with several notable directors of the 1940s and 1950s.

He reports on Howard Hawks recalling the genesis of his film version of To Have And Have Not and telling Bogdanovich that
[when] I told Hemingway I could make a picture out of his worst book, he said, rather grumpily, ‘What’s my worst book?’ I said, ‘That bunch of junk called ‘To Have and Have Not.’
Hemingway then justified writing ‘that bunch of junk’ because he ‘needed money’ according to Hawks.

For his new novel, Hemingway decided to amalgamate two previously published short stories about a hard-done-by jobbing boat owner — One Trip Across, which had appeared in Cosmopolitan, and The Tradesman’s Return, which appeared in Esquire. To conclude the novel, he planned to add a longer novella.

A cynic might suggest that proceeding like that rather than producing original work suggested Hemingway was out of ideas. If he was, that, too, would have weighed on his mind and would not have lightened the dark mood that continued to plague him.

As usual in the autumn (and when the hurricane season precluded deep-sea fishing) in 1936 Hemingway and his family travelled from Key West to spend several months on the L Bar T dude ranch near the Montana and Wyoming border.

There he worked on his new novel in the morning and made good progress, but his depression did no lift. Tommy Shevlin, a young, wealthy fishing friend Hemingway had first met in Bimini and who had been invited to join the Hemingways at the L Bar T, later remembered of his time at the ranch
It’s extraordinary the number of times [Hemingway] mentioned suicide.
Michael Reynolds writes
For a thirty-seven-year-old man at the height of his physical and mental powers, Hemingway was inordinately drawn to the contemplation of his own demise
He says that
he had written Pauline’s mother that the Pfeiffer bloodline was what his children needed ‘to try to breed some of the suicide streak’ out of them.
At about the same time Hemingway told his friend Archibald MacLeish
Me I like life very much. So much it will be a big disgust when I have to shoot myself.
His talk of a family ‘suicide streak’ is rather lurid, but arguably there was one: Hemingway’s father, Ed, killed himself in 1928, Hemingway blew his head of in 1961, his sister Ursula took her life five years after Hemingway’s death, his brother Leicester killed himself 15 years later and his granddaughter Margaux taking a barbiturate overdose in 1996.

. . .

Hemingway’s planned to write a complex, multi-layered novel incorporating his main theme contrasting the lives of the ‘rich haves’ and the ‘poor have-nots’ as well as examining how revolutions come about.

Although his new work was intended to satisfy the demands from the literary left for a ‘politically engaged’ novel, once it was published in October 1937, many were bemused by the values of its hero.

The ‘have-not’ Harry Morgan was a man who stressed individuality and self-reliance — standard Hemingway themes — so how might he be thought to celebrate the idea of a community working together for the common good — a standard left-of-centre theme? It didn’t add up.

Nor did it help that Morgan turned to crime and then became a cold-blooded murderer. Had Morgan, arguably, been forced to go outside the law by economic circumstance — a rich man, a ‘have’, does not pay Morgan what he is owed — the left might have been assuaged.

But Hemingway’s ‘hero’ then murders a man in cold blood and abandons a boatload of would-be immigrants without a second thought. Such a man was not the paradigm of enlightened, brotherly and socialist behaviour the literary left hoped Hemingway would champion.

Such political quibbles aside, the novel was also deemed to be a mess. The various plots and sub-plots Hemingway planned to include but then abandoned, the shifts in narrative viewpoint (from first to third person, then back to first person), the often melodramatic descriptions and an overall narrative patchiness of a work almost arbitrarily shackled together added to confusion and did not win over the critics. Biographers claim the novel also served to settle scores.

One unpleasant character, the rich ‘have’ Helène Bradley, is believed to be intended to discredit Hemingway’s former lover, Jane Mason (whose supposed alter ego Margot Macomber he described as ‘an all-American bitch’).

Another less than admirable character, the left-wing, drunk, despised, cuckolded and impotent novelist Richard Gordon is thought to be an attack on Hemingway’s — by now nominal — ‘close friend’ John Dos Passos.

Dos Passos and his wife Katy had, independently, both known Hemingway before he became the very well-known ‘Papa’ Hemingway, and they were more than inclined to tease him about his airs and graces. Biographer Carlos Baker reports
As old and easygoing friends Dos and Katy did their best to keep him “kidded down to size”. In their eyes he had become a shade to conspicuously ‘the famous author the great sports-fisherman, the mighty African hunter’.
Ever prickly and sensitive to criticism, it is unlikely that Hemingway took kindly to such ribbing and is thought to have taken his revenge. The character of he based on Katy Dos Passos, nee Smith, he wrote
likes to steal as much as a monkey does.
It was an open secret that Katy Smith suffered from kleptomania. His Esquire editor Arnold Gingrich (with whom Hemingway also eventually fell out) persuaded him to delete or tone down some of the more libellous passages.

The publication of To Have And Have Not did little to halt the downward course Hemingway’s literary reputation. Sales began well — they reached 36,000 in the first few months and Jeffrey Meyers suggests that a reading public that had waited eight years for a new ‘Hemingway novel’ were keen to buy it; but to Scribner’s continuing disappointment they then tailed off and did not match those of Hemingway’s previous two novels.

In fact, it is possible that Scribner’s were pessimistic from the outset, and fearing low sales after the poor reception of Death In The Afternoon and Green Hills Of Africa, the house ordered an initial print run for To Have And Have Not of just 10,000 copies — for A Farewell To Arms the initial print run was 30,000.

Nor is it the title of Hemingway’s novel which still resonates with the public today: when we hear of To Have And Have Not, we are more likely to recall the Howard Hawks film starring Humphrey Bogart and Lauren Bacall.

In fact, the only thing the film has in common with Hemingway’s novel is its title, the names of several protagonists and details from its opening chapter. (In his conversation with Bogdanovich, Hawks admits that the only element he valued in Hemingway’s ‘bunch of junk’ was the passionate relationship between Harry Morgan and his wife Marie and he used it as the core of his film.)

If the left-wing was unimpressed with Hemingway’s new novel, the critics were also underwhelmed. One New York Times reviewer chose to look on the bright side and wrote that
Like an inventor without a patent, [Hemingway] has lived to see other men make more money out of the way of writing he developed. But no one else can use it with his integrity, force and precision.
But he did note in the novel ‘the disjointedness of an expanded short story’. Another Times reviewer, J. Donald Adams, commented that
The famous Hemingway dialogue reveals itself as never before in its true nature. It is false to life, cut to a purely mechanized formula. You cannot separate the speech of one character from another and tell who is speaking. They all talk alike.
And pre-dating Bruccoli’s later observation on the gradual decline in the quality of Hemingway’s work, he observed
‘[Hemingway] has moved steadily toward mastery of his technique, though that is by no means the perfect instrument it has been praised for being. Technique, however, is not enough to make a great writer, and that is what we have been asked to believe Mr Hemingway was in process of becoming. The indications of such a growth are absent from this book, as they have been absent from everything Mr. Hemingway has written since A Farewell to Arms. There is evidence of no mental growth whatever; there is no better understanding of life, no increase in his power to illuminate it or even to present it. Essentially, this new novel is an empty book.’
He concluded
In spite of its frequent strength as narrative writing, To Have and Have Not is a novel distinctly inferior to A Farewell to Arms . . . Mr. Hemingway’s record as a creative writer would be stronger if it had never been published.
. . .

Hemingway’s affair with Martha Gellhorn began at some point after they first met in Sloppy Joe’s Key West bar in December 1936. Gellhorn, her mother Edna and brother Alfred had decided on a break off the beaten track after her father Dr George Gellhorn died, and somehow ended up in Key West.

Gellhorn meeting Hemingway is usually portrayed and accepted as a chance encounter, but one of Hemingway’s more recent biographers, Mary Dearborn, has suggested it was engineered by Gellhorn because she wanted to meet Hemingway.

One wonders why a respectable, newly-widowed upper middle-class St Louis woman and her two adult children would not just choose to travel to a then out-of-the-way island which was not yet a tourist destination, but decide to have a drink in a down-at-heel bar such as Sloppy Joe’s.

In short, Dearborn might have a point. Gellhorn had long been a fan of Hemingway’s writing and was then still an aspiring writer with a novel and a volume of short stories to her name (although it has rather cattily been claimed that her ambitions were greater than her talent).

She will have known Hemingway lived in Key West and might have heard he drank at Sloppy Joe’s, but whether she suggested visiting Key West or that meeting him really was just happenstance can now never be known.

The affair was not Hemingway’s first since marrying Pauline Pfeiffer seven years earlier, although despite his juvenile macho boasting of ‘whoring’, he is unlikely to have had any others in the 1930s except with Jane Kendall Mason.

He met Jane Mason (left) when sailing back to the US from Europe in the autumn of 1931. He and Pfeiffer, heavily pregnant with their third son Gregory, came to know fellow passengers Grant Mason and his young, very good-looking and — Hemingway’s later description — uninhibited wife Jane.

The Masons lived in Cuba, in a very grand style, and both were rich in their own right. Grant Mason had co-founded Pan American Airways four years earlier and ran its central American and Caribbean operations; his wife, just 22 when she met Hemingway, had modelled for a Pond’s Cold Cream ad (which was, it seems, the sum total of her modelling career).

She was said, much to Hemingway’s later appreciation, to have been an excellent shot, a marvellous fisherwoman, excelled at most sports and could certainly match Hemingway for hard drinking.

She also partied hard, and the festivities the Masons organised at their mansion in Jaimanitas to the west of Havana were said sometimes to have lasted for over 24 hours.

Hemingway first visited Cuba after he had completed Death In The Afternoon in January 1932 and in April, alerted to the marlin that swam off the Cuban coast, he decided on a short trip to the island.

The trip was soon extended and lasted several months, and until he moved to Cuba in 1939, he spent months on end in Cuba away from Key West, for the fishing and the bar-life. He and Pfeiffer, who regularly took the ferry from Key West to visit her husband, became friends and socialised with the Masons.

At first Jane Mason accompanied Hemingway fishing for marlin and pigeon shooting, but as some point their affair began, and they are believed to have met for sex in room 511 of the Ambos Mundos Hotel in Havana where Hemingway always stayed.

Biographers report that after the birth of Hemingway’s third child, Gregory, in late 1931, doctors had again warned Pfeiffer against another pregnancy, and to avoid another conception she again insisted that the only intercourse she would have with her husband should involve coitus interruptus; thus their sex life came to an end.

Many years later, divorced from Hemingway and having lost her strong Roman Catholic faith, this seems to have been confirmed by Pfeiffer who reportedly told a friend
If I hadn’t been such a bloody fool practicing [US spelling] Catholic, I wouldn’t have lost my husband.
One of the many attractions Jane Mason is said to have held for Hemingway was that she was unable to conceive and there was no need to use contraception. (She and her husband adopted two boys, but their sons’ upbringing was largely left to staff.)

How long the affair between Hemingway and Mason lasted is uncertain. Jeffery Meyers says it was on and off for four years. Another account describes it as just a short ‘two-month’ affair, and Michael Reynolds doubts there even was a liaison.

He argues that Pfeiffer was often in Havana and continuing an affair would have been impossible. He doesn’t, though, seem to have considered what Hemingway and Jane might have got up to when Pfeiffer was safely back in Key West 90 miles away.

At one point Jane, who was said to have been emotionally unstable, jumped off a second-floor balcony at her Jaimanitas mansion in an apparent suicide attempt and broke her back.

The incident came two days after the car she was driving, with Jack and Patrick Hemingway and her son Anthony as passengers, was forced off the road and rolled down an embankment.

No one was hurt, but whether jumping from the balcony had anything to do with her subsequent state of mind after the crash or the state of her affair with Hemingway (or possibly for some other reason) is not known. It did, though, lead Hemingway to make the tacky quip that Jane had literally ‘fallen for him’.

Some biographers have speculated that Hemingway was lining up Jane to be the third Mrs Hemingway, but that after she jumped from the balcony, he decided that she was too unstable. They also suggest he still wanted to father a daughter and Mason’s infertility also had a bearing on his reluctance.

In the wake of the incident, her husband had her treated for psychological problems and she had to spend a whole year in a brace.

Reynolds’s doubts notwithstanding, Pfeiffer is believed to have been quite aware of her husband’s affair with Jane, as was Jane’s husband Grant; but whereas Grant apparently simply did not care, Pfeiffer took the view that it would eventually burn itself out, as ironically Hadley Richardson had when Pfeiffer was having her liaison with Hemingway in Paris.

The affair eventually did end, but it did so badly, although the details are obscure. Despite Hemingway’s tacky joke, he would seem it was he who had fallen for Mason and he most certainly could not abide rivals.

‘Uninhibited’ Jane refused to restrict herself to just one lover and began an affair with a white hunter she had met on safari in East Africa.

When the man arrived in the US to see her, their sexual relationship continued, and Jane made no effort to conceal it from Hemingway; the situation became too much for him and he called it a day.

But never one to settle for being bested, he had his revenge: biographers agree that the femme fatale Margot Macomber, who shoots her husband in the back of the head — an accident or murder? — and he rich and nasty Helène Bradley in his novel To Have And Have Not, and were based on Jane Mason.

Both are portrayed as distinctly unpleasant women. Hemingway’s description of Margot in The Short Happy Live Of Francis Macomber quite possibly reflects how he felt about her once their affair had ended: Margot was
enamelled [sic] in that American female cruelty.
According to biographer Kenneth Lynn, Hemingway confirms that he chose Jane as his model for Margo Macomber in an essay he wrote in 1959 (but which was not published for another 22 years) called The Art Of The Short Story. He wrote
I invented her complete with handles from the worst bitch I knew (then) and when I first knew her she’d been lovely. Not my dish, not my pigeon, not my cup of tea, but lovely for what she was, and I was her all of the above, which is whatever you make of it.
An irony is that despite Hemingway’s subsequent disingenuous claim she was not his ‘dish, pigeon or cup of tea’, he did all the running in the affair, not Jane, who knew she was very attractive and was never short of admirers; and it was undoubtedly Jane who added the anonymous, jokey and teasing entry in the log of his 35ft-cruiser Pilar that ‘Ernest loves Jane’.

As for Grant Mason, he is believed to have been Hemingway’s model for Helène Bradley’s playboy husband Tommy. The two men did not get on, but did not fall out, either, but are said simply to have been indifferent one another.



1929-1940 — Part I: Fame and growing wealth

EACH of these essays/entries is intended to stand alone, so there is a certain degree of duplication in them as it is unlikely they will be read in sequence or even that all will be read by a visitor to these pages. This is intentional: someone reading an essay/entry must not be puzzled by some allusion she or he might not understand because they have not read the other essays/entries.


Leaving Paris and dividing his time between Key West and Wyoming cut Hemingway off from Cosmopolitan culture and educated friends, and shifted his interest to marlin-fishing and bear hunting. He had no intellectual equals in Florida and dominated friends who deferred to him as the local hero. He was a great listener before he moved to Key West and a great talker afterwards. The new atmosphere encouraged him to adopt coarse language, to indulge in heroics, to boast, to swagger, to suppress the sensitive side of his nature and to cultivate the public image. In Key West Hemingway was (and is) not only a living legend, but also the main tourist attraction.
Jeffery Meyers, Hemingway: A Biography.

A man is essentially what he hides. The real and most important of the many Hemingway was the reflective man who wrote the books and concealed his innate sensitivity under the mask of a man of action. Though he like to rage against aesthetic posturing — ‘Artist, art, artistic! Can’t we ever hear the last of that stuff’ — he was, as James Thurber remarked, ‘gentle, understanding, sympathetic, compassionate.’ Yet Hemingway rejected this side of his character. Max Eastman said that in Death In The Afternoon Hemingway deliberately turned ‘himself into a blustering roughneck crying for more killing and largely dedicated to demonstrating his ability to take any quantity of carnage in his powerful stride’. . . The transformation from private to public man, spurred by wealth and fame, began to take place in the early 1930s. It helped to explain the gradual decline of his work after A Farewell To Arms and the sharp descent after For Whom The Bell Tolls.
Jeffery Meyers, Hemingway: A Biography.

THE FOURTH decade of the 21st century saw Hemingway’s fame steadily grow, but after just four years in the literary vanguard it also saw his reputation as a writer slowly decline.

He was still writing steadily, though much of what he produced was journalism, which paid him well; yet the stir he had created early in his career was not repeated until the beginning of the 1940s when he published his bestseller For Whom The Bell Tolls and then not again for another 13 years until The Old Man And The Sea appeared. It became obvious that the promise he had shown as a young turk in Paris was not to be vindicated.

For the sake of convenience, one might consider there to have been four separate stages in Hemingway’s life, each stage correlating to the woman to whom he was then married. The first stage saw him, with Hadley Richardson as his first wife, living in Paris and intent of making his way as a writer, fathering his first son and learning to network.

That stage concluded with the success of his first collection of short stories, the almost overnight success of his novel The Sun Also Rises, his divorce from Richardson after five and a half years of marriage, and his second marriage, to Pauline Pfeiffer.

When the second stage of his life began, he had made a name for himself as an up-and-coming young writer and was completing what was to become his second bestseller. He was riding high. He fathered two more sons and published several more books, and, in part thanks to his second wife’s money, Hemingway was now able to live the life of a wealthy man.

But just a few years into his second marriage, he began an affair with a woman who was 14 years younger than Pfeiffer, and although one biographer, Michael Reynolds, writes that he doubts that this affair took place, other biographers insist it did; but it did not break up his marriage. But a second 
affair, with the woman who was to become his third wife, did, and his divorce from Pfeiffer and marriage to Martha Gellhorn (right) in 1940 concluded what might be seen as the second stage of his life.

The third stage saw Hemingway publish just one work, For Whom The Bell Tolls, but it, too, was a bestseller. His third marriage eventually disintegrated, in part due to Hemingway’s insistence that Gellhorn should be the kind of doting wife Richardson and Pfeiffer had been and who would put him at the centre of everything.

Gellhorn, herself a published novelist and working journalist, and not least ambitious was not that kind of woman. For a while she did try to live the life of being ‘the novelist Ernest Hemingway’s wife’(and his three sons became fond of their new stepmother though they are said to have regarded her more as an older sister); but she was unhappy and soon sought and found journalistic assignments which took her away from home.

By the time Hemingway acknowledged that the marriage had failed and, in 1945, agreed to give Gellhorn the divorce she wanted, he had already started a relationship with Mary Welsh. Despite Welsh’s profound misgivings, both from the start of her relationship with Hemingway and throughout their marriage, in 1946 she became his fourth and last wife, and a nominal fourth stage of his life began.

As Jeffery Meyers points out in his biography, the 1930s saw the invention of the ‘famous Papa Hemingway’ the world came to know and to some extent revere. Although that figure was based on the ‘real’ Hemingway, it was a self-conscious contrivance (and was thus in some ways quite artificial). The private man — the sensitive writer — and the public figure he sold to the world — the action man celebrity — diverged ever more, with the public figure eventually swamping the private man.

Halfway through the 1930s Hemingway suffered a severe and prolonged bout of depression. Although he had experienced depressions throughout his life (with some biographers suggesting that he, like his father who shot himself in 1928, might have been bi-polar), this episode was worse than anything he had suffered before. It is thought that from the early 1930s on and for the rest of his life Hemingway increasingly found it a strain to live up to the image of himself he had created.

Many friends from his early days testified to the thoughtful, intellectual, quite shy and kind man they knew in Hemingway; but this was on total conflict with the action-man writer who drank a great deal, was free with his fists and would take no bullshit from anyone he seemed to want the world to accept. 

Little by little the ‘old, private’ Hemingway came to be buried and the ‘new, public’ Hemingway took over. Certainly, the conflict affected his work, the quality of which tailed off. Despite the excitable claim by one biographer, Michael Reynolds, that in his 1935 book Green Hills Of Africa, Hemingway had taken writing ‘into a fourth and fifth dimension’ (whatever that means), he never recaptured the reputation for iconoclasm he had — to my mind somewhat spuriously — gained in the Paris years. Thus, writing in the New York Times in 1962, Maxwell Geismar noted
Sometimes called Hemingway’s best novel, too, [For Whom The Bell Tolls] is a curious mixture of good and bad, of marvelous scenes and chapters which are balanced off by improbable or sentimental or melodramatic passages of adolescent fantasy development.
Geismar’s observation chimes with that of the novelist Vladimir Nabokov who declared that Hemingway ‘was a writer for boys’.

It is pertinent that Hemingway’s ostentatious and repeated insistence as the young unknown of the 1920s Paris years that he was only concerned with creating his fiction and art, and had no interest in fame or its trapping was nonsense. From the outset and even when still an unknown, as John Raeburn shows in Fame Became Him, Hemingway engaged in a subtle and effective campaign of self-promotion and networking. As his once close friend in Paris, F. Scott Fitzgerald, noted
Ernest would always give a helping hand to a man on a ledge a little higher up.
With the publication of The Sun Also Rises, he took a detailed and active interest in his image and how he was marketed, and until the day he died he had an unceasing concern with how the world viewed him as ‘one of American’s greatest contemporary writers’ (which he truly believed he was).

. . .

Even though Scribner’s Magazine started serialising A Farewell To Arms in May 1929, the work was not yet wholly complete. Hemingway was dissatisfied with the novel’s ending and so — he claimed — he wrote dozens more, trying to find the right way to conclude his story. He had worked on that ending while crossing from Havana to Europe in the spring of 1929 and once back in France continued trying to find the right one.

He immediately took off to Hendaye, then a small fishing village just south of Biarritz, when his son Patrick, not yet 12 months old, was hospitalised with influenza. It didn’t matter that, in addition, his wife Pauline had to undergo surgery to clear her sinuses. Hemingway, according to Michael Reynolds, had a ‘mortal fear of flu’ and thought it best to remove himself from the danger of contracting it from his baby son.

He chose Hendaye because several years earlier he had written the last few pages of The Sun Also Rises there, and now he was back to find that satisfactory but elusive conclusion to A Farewell To Arms. In the event he could not and only came up with the ending to the novel as we now know when he was back in Paris by the middle of May.

In July Hemingway was back in Pamplona for the bullfighting, with Uncle Gus, Pauline’s sister Jinny and his journalist friend Guy Hickock. Pauline had remained in Paris, but joined him after the fiesta had ended (with her hair dyed blonde to surprise him) for another tour of Spain.

Their subsequent extended tour of more bullfights and a return to Santiago de Compostela was not a complete success: Hemingway and Pfeiffer argued so much that Hemingway even made a note in his diary of the days when they did not argue.

For one thing, Pfeiffer was becoming ever more concerned about how much Hemingway was drinking, but Reynolds suggests that his volatile moods and the outburst of temper which were spoiling the trip were also because now he had finally finished his novel, he felt empty. Hemingway himself described, rather pretentiously — the scrap of paper from which this is taken is, like all the other scraps of paper Hemingway could not bring himself to throw away, in the JFK Library in Boston — that
within the writer there was his death, and that death was the book.
The writer might physically survive any number of books, Hemingway tells us, but
each [book] would kill off a part of him, a piece of what he knew, leaving the book with a life of its own.
Another possible reason for the arguments between the couple might have been the aversion Pfeiffer had to contraception and the effect it had on Hemingway’s sex life. After her problems when giving birth to her second son — Patrick was eventually delivered by caesarean section — Pfeiffer was told by her doctor that she should not consider having another child for at least three years. Various biographers have established that Pfeiffer — then still a devout Roman Catholic — refused to use any artificial form of contraception and would only consider practising coitus interruptus.

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Although Hemingway and Pfeiffer carried on renting their flat in the rue Froidevaux, they were not settled and spent the next few years commuting between Paris and Key West, Spain and Wyoming. After their two-month tour of Spain, they were back in Paris by mid-September, and A Farewell To Arms was published towards the end of October 1929.

Sales were spectacular, and on the back of the fame-cum-notoriety Hemingway had achieved with The Sun Also Rises, the novel consolidated his position as the writer on whom to keep a keen eye. The first 30,000 copies printed sold out within three weeks, and in quick succession two more print runs of 10,000 each were ordered. His fame and new position as a writer of consequence also had a bearing on his lifestyle. 

For several years Hemingway and Hadley, not poor (despite Hemingway’s persistent claims) but not rich either, had enjoyed spending Christmas in cosy, comfortable and — for Americans with dollars to exchange for local currency — exceptionally cheap Schruns in Austria.

Christmas 1929 was spent in Switzerland in a much grander style, with various wealthy friends, including Gerald and Sara Murphy, Scott and Zelda Fitzgerald and, now newly married to each other (and not quite as wealthy), John Dos Passos and Katy Smith. (Smith was the sister of Hemingway’s friend Bill from the Walloon Park days, and he had known here since he was 12. She was also, coincidentally, a friend and roommate of Pfeiffer’s at college). This, too, was part of the transformation of ‘Ernest Hemingway, the aspiring young writer’ into Ernest Hemingway, the ‘successful author’.

Hemingway and Pfeiffer did not see in New Year 1930 in Switzerland, and just over a week after returning to Paris, they set sail back to Key West (where they were still renting). There Hemingway entertained friends and his Scribner’s editor Max Perkins, and tried to interest them in his new enthusiasm, marlin fishing.

Later in the year, he took off with his family for his first several months of hunting and fishing in the American West, and it became his practice to spend the late summer and early autumn in Wyoming, later in Montana and later still in Idaho. He had already started work on his ‘bullfighting and writing’ book Death In The Afternoon earlier in the year while Perkins was staying and carried on writing it over the following months.

The ostensible reason for returning to Key West had been for Hemingway to have somewhere quiet to write; yet he was, in fact, quite happy settling down to write wherever he was, whether in Key West or the Rockies, following his usual routine of writing in the morning and hunting or fishing in the afternoon.

Then, in the November, came the car crash in Wyoming in which he was badly injured, and he had to abandon work on the book for several months. Driving with Dos Passos as a passenger, he had been dazzled by the lights of an oncoming truck, swerved and rolled the car. The accident saw him break his right arm severely between his elbow and shoulder, and writing became impossible.

Holed up in hospital in Billings for many weeks did not improve his mood. Archibald MacLeish (below left), his, then still close, friend from their Paris days, spent 48 hours travelling all the way from the east coast to visit Hemingway, only to be accused by Hemingway, bizarrely, of coming out to see him die. 
When he was eventually discharged from hospital just before Christmas 1930, though still able to do little with his right arm, he spent the holiday in Piggott with his wife’s family.

In the spring of 1931 and after living in Key West rentals for several years, Hemingway and Pfeiffer bought a house in Whitehead Street — or rather good old Uncle Gus bought it for them. The house was 80 years old and somewhat dilapidated, but had once been one of the smartest houses on what was then still an island; over the following years Pfeiffer renovated and extended it extensively.

It was a distinct improvement on the pokey tenement flats with a communal lavatory in the hallway Hemingway had chosen to live in in Paris; thus the transformation of Hemingway, the ‘writer who had starved for his art’ of his early years into Hemingway ‘the wealthy and well-known novelist’ continued.

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A Farewell To Arms did indeed make him wealthy with his own money: when passing through New York on his way from Paris to Key West at the end of January, he was informed that in just three months it had already sold 80,000 copies.

According to Michael Reynolds, Hemingway’s accounts for 1929 showed that he had earned $18,416 (the equivalent of $282,806 in 2021). With the addition of Pfeiffer’s annual trust fund income of $6,000 ($92,139 in 2021) Hemingway was now able and did live the very good life.

That right arm took some time to heal. but once it was finally functional and Hemingway was able to work again, he and Pfeiffer sailed back to Europe, Hemingway to Madrid to undertake further research for Death In The Afternoon and Pfeiffer back to Paris.

She eventually joined him in Spain, and in July they were back at the Pamplona festival, then undertook another extended tour of Spain. By September Pfeiffer was seven months pregnant, and she and Hemingway sailed back to the US. It was on that voyage that Hemingway met Jane Kendall Mason with whom he went on to have his first affair while married to Pfeiffer.

The house in Whitehead Street which Pfeiffer's Uncle Gus bought for her
and Hemingway and which was his home in Key West for almost ten years


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The startling success his early years as a writer and of his two volumes of short stories and two novels did not continue, and Hemingway’s literary career took something of a left turn in the 1930s.

By the end of January 1932, he had finally completed Death In The Afternoon, a curious amalgam of an extensive guide to bullfighting, its history, practices and lore, as well as his pronouncements on writing and literature, and it was published the following September.

In 1935 came Green Hills Of Africa, his semi-fictional book about his two-month safari in East Africa of the year before (which was again funded by Uncle Gus). It was another curious amalgam, this time his account of big-game hunting, its practices and the African people he came into contact with. It, too, allowed him to pronounce on writing, literature and the work of several of his fellow writers.

By then, still only in his mid-thirties Hemingway regarded himself as some kind of literary sage and now believed he was qualified to lay down the law on what constituted ‘good writing’.

Neither his bullfighting book nor his safari book sold well, and both had a mixed critical reception. Reviewing the book in New Republic, the influential critic, literary theorist and notably a one-time Hemingway champion Edmund Wilson (right) wrote
[Hemingway] delivers a self-confident lecture on the high possibilities of prose writing, with the implication that he himself, Hemingway, has realized or hopes to realize these possibilities; and then writes what are certainly, from the point of view of prose, the very worst pages of his life. There is one passage which is hardly even intelligible — the most serious possible fault for a writer who is always insisting on the supreme importance of lucidity.
The criticism is quite specific, especially in Wilson’s concern about a lack of lucidity in the prose verging on unintelligibility. A wiser writer might have taken note, but Hemingway, who had convinced himself he was one of America’s best writers, took no heed. Revisiting the book several years later — and still unimpressed — Wilson added
[Hemingway] has produced what must be one of the only books ever written which make Africa and its animals seem dull. Almost the only thing we learned about the animals is that Hemingway wants to kill them. And as for the natives . . . The principal impression we get of them is that they were simple and inferior people who enormously admired Hemingway.
Writing in the New York Times, Charles Poore was not as dismissive and noted
The writing is the thing; that way he has of getting down with beautiful precision the exact way things look, smell, taste, feel, sound.
But this praise is more than tempered by his astonishment that
Some of his sentences in Green Hills Of Africa would make Henry James take a breath. There’s one that starts on page 148, swings the length of 149 and lands on 150, forty lines or so from tip to tip.
Again, what was Hemingway, the advocate of ‘the importance of lucidity’ thinking? Did the writer who insisted — boasted — he re-wrote and revised his work obsessively even bother to read over what he had produced? It’s hard to believe he had, and a sentence which
starts on page 148, swings the length of 149 and lands on 150, forty lines or so from tip to tip
might well have done with revision, especially if parts of the book, according to Wilson, were ‘hardly even intelligible’. Perhaps Wilson, Poore and the other critics who were less than enchanted by Hemingway’s new book were also not pleased by his — now very well-known and somewhat tactless — description of them in Green Hills Of Africa as
lice who crawl on literature. 
. . .

Two years earlier, in 1933, Hemingway had published Winner Take Nothing [sic], his third volume of short stories, and it, too, had failed to set the reading public alight. It has been suggested that in Depression-era America the downbeat title of the collection and its publication in time for the Christmas market did sales no favours.

Its lukewarm reception by the critics did not cheer up Hemingway, who demanded unalloyed admiration as a matter of course. In The Artist’s Reward, a profile of Hemingway Dorothy Parker had written for the New Yorker in 1929 just after A Farewell To Arms had been published, she had observed:
As I wrote this, the reviews of A Farewell To Arms had not yet reached Ernest Hemingway in Paris. All those by what are called the big critics may be laudatory, serious and understanding; but it is safe to say that if there be included among them one tiny clipping announcing that Miss Harriet McBlease, who does ‘Book-Looks’ for the Middletown Observer-Companion, does not find the new Hemingway book to her taste, that will be the one Our Hero will select to brood over . . .
Overall, the 1930s did, though, see Hemingway at his industrious best, and his time was certainly not all spent marlin fishing off the Cuban coast and hunting in Wyoming and Montana. In the early months of each year living in Key West, he produced several short stories, following his established routine of getting down to write in the early morning, then, four or five hours of work done, relaxing in the afternoons.

Apart from his fiction, he also produced light, journalistic pieces, particularly for the men’s lifestyle magazine, Esquire, and later for Ken, a left-leaning political magazine which were both co-founded by Arnold Gingrich. Ken first appeared in April 1938, but lasted for just over a year and fell foul of potential advertisers not much liking it’s political position even though this had specifically been toned down

The pieces Hemingway wrote for Esquire, which the magazine called ‘Letters’, were mainly — although not exclusively — articles on hunting and fishing, and he had licence to write on whatever topic he liked. (As Raeburn demonstrates in Fame Became Him, Hemingway was invariably always centre-stage in these pieces, subtly establishing his credentials as an expert or authority on pretty much everything).

The arrangement — and Hemingway later admitted that he could hardly believe his luck in landing it — came about because of the high public profile he was enjoying from 1930 on.

Gingrich (left), who launched Esquire in 1933 as a fashion magazine for men along the lines of Vogue, calculated that having Hemingway’s by-line would give his magazine cachet and attract male readers. Gingrich had bumped into him in a New York bookshop several months before the magazine was launched and on the spot asked him whether he would write for Esquire.

There was, though, according to Adrienne Westenfield, writing in Esquire about the friendship between Gingrich and Hemingway, a second reason for hiring Hemingway: because the magazine was to be distributed in gentlemen’s clothes stores and haberdashers, Gingrich was worried it might mainly attract a gay readership and presumably discourage heterosexuals. His solution (which might now makes us laugh) was, writes Westenfield,
to publish supposedly ‘manly’ stories about sports and outdoor pursuits. He set his sights on Hemingway, an ascendant celebrity novelist and prolific journalist with two acclaimed novels under his belt (The Sun Also Rises and A Farewell To Arms), but also an avid outdoorsman as famed for his hyper-masculine pastimes as for his literature.
Gingrich was an astute businessman, but Hemingway knew his worth: the contract he signed saw him — eventually — being paid twice as much as any other contributor. For the first issue, however, Hemingway had, uncharacteristically, agreed to a comparatively modest $250 ($5,092 in 2021) for each piece he wrote after Gingrich told him that was all his magazine could afford; but, says Westenfield, Hemingway swore Gingrich to secrecy: he feared it would damage his reputation if word got out that he, the great writer, had settled for such a pittance.

When the first issue in October 1933 sold far better than expected and Gingrich decided the second and future issues should also be available on newsstands, Hemingway immediately demanded $500 for each ‘Letter’ (and his fee later even reached $1,000). In a letter to Gingrich, Hemingway, says Westenfield, outlined that his philosophy was
[to] make all comercial [sic] magazines pay the top rate they have ever paid anybody. This makes them love and appreciate your stuff and realize what a fine writer you are.
Gingrich, who regarded hiring Hemingway as something of a coup and later in life confessed he had seen Hemingway as the magazine’s ‘principal asset’, also agreed to allow Hemingway’s work to remain unedited and appear as it was submitted. A bonus of Hemingway’s involvement was, for Gingrich, that it had also encouraged other ‘name’ writers such as Theodore Dreiser, Scott Fitzgerald, John Dos Passos, Dashiell Hammett and Ring Lardner to contribute to his magazine.

Hemingway's first letter for the launch issue of Arnold Gingrich's Esquire in October 1933. He was paid 'only' $250 ($5,092). When the magazine proved
to be a great success, distribution was expanded and Hemingway demanded
and got $500 for each letter. Gingrich later admitted he regarded Hemingway
as one of his magazine's 'prime assets'